Poetry of Motion...was Re: [at-l] [cubicle horror] REENTRY JOURNAL

[chaynes@javanet.com (Clifford R. Haynes)]

Now lets see do I have this right?

Silver babbling brook
Blue speckled trout awaits the hook
Salt pork cornmeal cook


Hmm yup a poet I'm not.
And LNT it's not.


----- Original Message -----
From: "The Lehmkuhl Family" <lehmkuhl@gte.net>
To: "Jim Mayer" <jmayer@rochester.rr.com>; "Sloetoe" <sloetoe@yahoo.com>;
"kahley" <kahley7@ptd.net>; <at-l@backcountry.net>
Sent: Thursday, September 06, 2001 1:19 AM
Subject: Re: Poetry of Motion...was Re: [at-l] [cubicle horror] REENTRY
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> my contribution.
>
> September's harvest moon
> hangs full-bellied inches from
> the horizon - how?
>
> Riding ever higher,
> tinted blood red to golden,
> it's splendor boldly evident
>
> 'Til at it's zenith,
> brilliant white, moon speaks to us
> of coming frost.
>
> not exactly a hiaku, :)
> vera
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Jim Mayer" <jmayer@rochester.rr.com>
> To: "Sloetoe" <sloetoe@yahoo.com>; "kahley" <kahley7@ptd.net>;
> <at-l@backcountry.net>
> Sent: Wednesday, September 05, 2001 6:49 PM
> Subject: Re: Poetry of Motion...was Re: [at-l] [cubicle horror] REENTRY
> JOURNAL
>
>
> > Many little steps
> > When strung from spring to autumn
> > Fly across mountains
> >
> > -- Jim
> >
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "Sloetoe" <sloetoe@yahoo.com>
> > To: "kahley" <kahley7@ptd.net>; "Sloetoe" <sloetoe@yahoo.com>;
> > <at-l@backcountry.net>
> > Sent: Wednesday, September 05, 2001 6:04 PM
> > Subject: Re: Poetry of Motion...was Re: [at-l] [cubicle horror] REENTRY
> > JOURNAL
> >
> >
> > >
> > > --- kahley <kahley7@ptd.net> wrote:
> > > > At 07:23 AM 9/5/01 -0700, Sloetoe wrote:
> > > > >### I've always been partial to
> > > > >
> > > > >It's moving your tail
> > > > >That gets you up the trail
> > > > >And nothing else.
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > >(Technically, it's a 5-6-4, not a 5-7-5, but I'm more than zen
enough
> > > > to forgive myself.)
> > > >
> > > > Didn't have to be Hiaku anyway Toey. Mine sure wasn't <g>
> > > ### Yeah, but you see, with enough attention (and a day to think about
> > > it), I can work out:
> > >
> > > It's moving your tail               (5)
> > > That will get you up the trail      (7)
> > > Relentless forward motion.          (7)
> > >
> > > Dang!! And it misses the "...nothing else" part that really drives the
> > > whole thing home. Dang. (But I always thought "Relentless Forward
> Motion"
> > > would make a greatly evocative trail name...)
> > >
> > > Ah, well. It's a tradition thing. I'm big on tradition. (I'm big on
> going
> > > against convention, too -- whassat say?)
> > >
> > > Sloetoe
> > >
> > >
> >
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