[at-l] First draft, please critique

[infpeace at gmail.com (Nina)]

"Exquisite." Yup. That's a Bryson word. A nice touch. I used "exquisite" 
once in my book and thought to myself as I wrote it: "That's not a Waterfall 
word. That's a Bryson word."
 Weird.
 Waterfall

 On 6/5/05, Robert <infinity1plus1@yahoo.com> wrote: 
> 
> mind you its true... nobody up here knows how to make the damned things... 
> god i miss those
> 
> Shelly Hale <shellydhale@earthlink.net> wrote:I'm with Shane! Let's 
> see...what would be the best method?
> 
> Doing the Meow Mix song until it drives him insane and he thinks of it 
> every time he hikes?
> 
> Toothpicks under the fingernails?
> 
> Strand him out in the middle of the desert with no pocket change and a 
> Pepsi vending machine?
> 
> What about sending him to the South and making him work in a restaurant 
> and put up with Northerners making fun of him while he works
> the grill?
> 
> Tenacious Tanasi
> (Shelly Hale)
> 
> 
> http://groups.yahoo.com/group/hiking_backpacking_events/
> 
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: at-l-bounces@backcountry.net [mailto:at-l-bounces@backcountry.net] 
> On Behalf Of Shane Steinkamp
> Sent: Sunday, June 05, 2005 2:17 PM
> To: Felix
> Cc: AT-L List
> Subject: RE: [at-l] First draft, please critique
> 
> > >Dear Mr. Bryson:
> > >
> > <>
> >
> > Why didn't you show up at the Gathering?
> 
> I think sending a letter is kind of silly. I think we should kidnap him 
> and
> torture the answer out of him.
> 
> Shane
> 
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